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Ella age 12

As I go out to play

Within the house I want to stay

But out I go!

Silence is disturbed, grumbling ungrateful child.

he is warm he is all bundled up… Me? No! not even my leaves they have abandoned me

The tree is creaking

I-think it's not cold it snowing! light and fluffy

cold and puffy

Winter snow has come.

The child stops and looks

Up, into my branches and…

smiles.

Edith age 9

you think it's cold what do you even think your doing: I have to stand hear in the cold all day + night.

Cold indeed, un gratfull people, a ways grumdeling. noting better to do

What was that

I said I think you

should try being a human for a

day

will gladly

trade for day.

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Being a Brave Learner and sharing my freewrite:

The Tree says:

"Hello small friend! I hear your grumbles, I hear that those things you wrap yourself up in are bulky and uncomfortable. How lucky you are to have the soft and swishy fabrics to keep you cozy and warm on your wintry walk!

Tell me...

When was the last time you took your hand fluffs off, and laid your bare palms against the bark of one of my brethren?

When did you stop and look up into my canopy and let the dappled winter light shine on your rosy cheeks now that the sun is high enough in the sky to dapple?

When last did you pause and inhale deeply and let the scent of needles and pitch fill your lungs with my oxygenated goodness?

When have you stepped off the well-worn path and pressed your whole being into mine and felt me breathe life force from deep within the earth up and out and into every cell of you?

Come child, allow me to tell my stories and share my medicine. And you can offer yours."

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I'm really grateful you are posting these on your Substack - I plan to do them for myself to get out of a rut and strengthen my writing muscle!

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Wonderful! I hope you come back and share some of your freewriting.

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